i mean yeah like the idea!
i c what your goin for, nice use of reverb ( or may have been on the preset for the synth.. not sure) your drum pattern is ver of beat n different n i like it but id say there's maybe 1 or 2 drum kicks you could have left out and maybe play around with the high hats and the snares c if you can get some harder tones in there when it comes to percussion anyway! maybe play about wiv your compressors a bit also! other than that ! i like it ! tis very tribal trance! :D